Manifesto design tutorial and feedback

Today I presented my draft manifesto design to my tutor and group, I got some really good and helpful feedback and ideas such as making the text on my manifesto 3d, or using a metal wire to create the words and then overlay the image over the manifesto to create shadows and reflections. One person also suggested to remove the words as the image speaks for itself, however, I don't think some aspects like sustainability or vegan design clearly be shown in an image like this. The feedback has been very useful and helpful as it has made me think broader and I will continue to work on my manifesto to make it more interesting and personal.